The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday

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The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

The table provides information about the total number of sold products during an ordinary weekday in a coffee shop located inside an office building.
Overall, it is clearly shown that all throughout the day, coffee is the top choice beverage than tea, and for solid items, pastries had a higher total sales compared to sandwiches.
To start with, at 7:30-10-30, coffee and pastries had the highest sales at 265 and 275, respectively. The sales of tea are only almost half of the coffee’s total sales, while sandwiches is less than a quarter of pastries total sales. Between 10:30-2:30, coffee, tea, and pastries declined its sales, whereas sandwiches increased its sales to 150 items.
From mid to late afternoon, the two beverages and sandwiches dropped again its sales, but customers still prefer coffee and pastries. In the last three hours, the most picked item is coffee at 200 and sandwiches at 110 items sold and apparently, tea and pastries had the lowest sales at 75 and 80 items, respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, so, still, whereas, while, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06547619048 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68482735059 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1395937194 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17629391766 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887336564928 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832318511587 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125654532137 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949564109192 0.0819641961636 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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