The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country, millions.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table show that the number of people in millions who watch sports in television in four countries. From the first glance at, there are relatively different about amount of viewer between some sports in each of country.
Firstly, we can see, USA is a country that more people watch sports on television than the other three countries. The data also indicates that tennis was very popular among four countries. Besides, not many people watch motor racing on television, especially USA and Canada. In USA, television viewing figures for golf is the highest, it ‘s just over eleven millions people. The last sport is mentioned, athletics isn’t quite general in combination with other sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat the number of people in millions who watch sports in television in four count...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 591.0 965.302439024 61% => OK
No of words: 114.0 196.424390244 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18421052632 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.26757987692 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5209036814 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.719298245614 0.547539520022 131% => OK
syllable_count: 180.0 283.868780488 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.4490660668 43.030603864 34% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.4285714286 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150151941542 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660866770093 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590427412901 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124556331084 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265456071692 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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