The table below shows the in which sector of the economy different age groups were employed.
The table illustrates, ten occupation sectors in which adults, younger and old people have worked.
Overall, in all occupational sectors manufacturing job have captured lot of people attention of all age people whereas, accountancy was the opposite which was having the lowest figure in all the occupations. The number of people in law remained the same in the three age groups.
According to the graph, 23 people were employed in manufacturing company with an age of 40-65years after that it was followed by 25-40 and 18-25 age people (15 and 12 respectively). The field of agriculture, catering, law and accountancy the workers average was 10 in all the groups. The number of staff in health department remained the same in young and old people but the adult workers was increased by 3 people. The retail employers were 23 in number of 18-25 years but in the other 2 groups it fall to an average of 7.
The majority have worked in other at 18-25 year group, but it decreased to 18 in the mid age while, the number of old age people fall by half of the 25-40 age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dult workers was increased by 3 people. The retail employers were 23 in number of 1...
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Message: Did you mean 'falls'?
Suggestion: falls
...8-25 years but in the other 2 groups it fall to an average of 7. The majority have ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r 2 groups it fall to an average of 7. The majority have worked in other at 18-25 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65079365079 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71096778345 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492063492063 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5143654441 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.875 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181963889599 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846229822411 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567808399525 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122143424464 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202114001456 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.