The table demonstrates the monthly income of five European countries(France, Germany, UK, Turkey, Spain)spend on four major items. They are food and drinks, housing, clothing and entertainment.
Firstly, housing was highest expenditure item in France, Germany and UK which was (31%, 33%, and 37% respectively). Turkey and Spain expenditure was lower in housing but, it was higher in food and drink was similarly same among all three countries were below 30%
Moreover, France and Spain spending on clothes were low which was below 10% and other countries like Germany, UK, Turkey were higher than 10% spending on clothing. However, on entertainment the Germany was up to spend more which was 19% followed by Spain which was 15% and other three countries were having similar consumption on entertainment.
Overall, all the countries spending on food and drinks was high. On clothing, all countries have spend less compare toh other items.
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...among all three countries were below 30% Moreover, France and Spain spending on c...
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...as high. On clothing, all countries have spend less compare toh other items.
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... high. On clothing, all countries have spend less compare toh other items.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, moreover, similarly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23287671233 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70550546199 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.9662598101 43.030603864 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.142857143 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262789392588 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167613767732 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123122221701 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22205936991 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.184090410861 0.0819641961636 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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