There are different agreements of people on inheritibility and environment on human intelligence. This debate will discuss both the views. There are plausible reasons.
First and foremost,supporter of parents inherited. The offspring’s intelligence came more from X chromosomes which is female and it is said that X chromosomes have twice time more genes than Y chromosomes in there offspring’s. It helps in making nerverse and brain of the person. Women play a vaital role during her pregnancy to make human intelligence. To examplify, if a women is pregnant and she learn an book or do any positive work and not bringing any negative thoughts in her mind than she is automatically making her offspring’s knowledgable and active.
On the other hand, supporter of the environment on person’s intelligence says that offspring’s intelligence based on the nature and environment around them city environment is different than village their both offspring’s intelligence will differ. For instinct, In city it would b more based on entertainment because offspring’s parents go for work and they may get late to go home because of traffic and they have to sometimes have to work late in office. This factor is more reasonable because human intelligence will be based on the way they saw and learn around them and when they go to school they learn what their teacher teach them and the books they read, the knowledge they get from others this all will improve the human intelligence and broader their mind.
To sumup, both way human intelligence is improved but move convinant is environmental factor because in this they get knowledge from everywhere other than parents inherited and in environmental factor they can get thing through visualising and knowing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33802816901 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42439670006 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492957746479 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.9458611804 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225741951387 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07517053435 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679417551113 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136330029223 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371950429962 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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