The table shows the data about growth rate of total population in US.
The table below illustrates the expected growth rate in the total population and people live more than 75 years in the US up to 2070.
Overall, IT can be observed that the total population, as well as the number of people who live more than 75 years, will be increased gradually over the period.
In 2015, The total population of the US was 64.8 million with 8.33% of people who were above 75 years old. It is expected that there will be a growth of 2.4 million people in 2020 with 9.08% of 75 years old people. Similarly, the figure in 2025 and 2030 will be accounted for 69.4 million and 71. million respectively.
After 2035, The rise in the figure will be almost doubled and reach up to 77 million in 2050 whereas there will be a slight decline in proportion for 75 years old people in 2050 as compared to 2035.
- Some people think that developed countries have higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. Discuss both these views 84
- Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labor. Therefore, working hours should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The line graph shows the data about export of cloth by three countries 91
- Advances in technology and automation have reduced the need for manual labor. Therefore, working hours should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- The graph shows the pollution levels in London between 1600 and 2000. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Million
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
similarly, well, whereas, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 672.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39215686275 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32201903421 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516339869281 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 188.1 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6102341251 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141193787709 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801391379414 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112620721194 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115139128187 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128465943036 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.94 61.2550243902 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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