the table shows under ground railways in six cities.
The table lists the locations, time, distance and annual passenger count in six metropolitan cities around the world.
A quick look at the table reveals that each city varies in its inception and operation in the underground network of railways.
The introduction of locomotives through tunnels in London was in the late nineteenth century (1863) covering a distance of 394 kilo meters. Paris replicated the system in 1900 with relatively less distance (199 km) , however, carried more passengers than London (1191 million against 775million).
The Japanese cities Tokyo and Kyoto began the subway railways network at different intervals(1927,1981 respectively). Tokyo , on the one hand, became the largest mass transporter system with 1927 million passengers each year with a distance under half of London [155km against 394km], Kyoto , on the other hand was the shortest distant carrier with least number of annual passenger count (11km and 45 million passengers).
There was a difference of 25 years between Washington DC and Los Angeles to start the tube network. While 126 kilometers of Washington DC was covered with underground network from 1976 for 144 million Americans to commute, Los Angeles was the latest to start the relatively less distant track of 28 kilometers for 50 million passengers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f of London [155km against 394km], Kyoto , on the other hand was the shortest dist...
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Line 9, column 343, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the least'.
Suggestion: with the least
...r hand was the shortest distant carrier with least number of annual passenger count 11km a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43137254902 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90210731879 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.1436646626 43.030603864 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0638715560887 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321487115968 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399551227009 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0447164426287 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439466905995 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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