The table shows the worldwide market share of the mobile phone market for manufacturers in the years 2005 and 2006.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The table compares mobile phone market share for eight manufactures all over the world in the years 2005 and 2006.
The table chart illustrates market share of electronic device manufacturers, namely mobile phone, around the world between 2005 and 2006.
In the first glance, it was noticeable that nokia was not only constantly remained the highest percentage of market share in this two-year period, but also had risen, which were from 32.5% in 2005 to 35% in 2006. Futhermore, Motorola had a suddenly surged from 17.7% to 21.1%, it had increased from the third highest to the second among others company.
Samsung and L.G , on the other hand, had shown a insignificant downward trend, which were only decreased of 0.9% and 0.5%, while BenQmobile had a sudden dropped of 2.5%. Not to mention, others company had also rapidly decreased of 3%.
To sum up, from the chart, nokia gadgets were popular in the global.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: G
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, while, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 676.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0447761194 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53761820864 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649253731343 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 190.8 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5380814267 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 5.23603664747 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131832210972 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681527279615 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112439069749 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938722311378 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125129485108 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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