The tables below
The table and pie charts demonstrate the comparison of the results of the survey in (the) Ashdown Museum, including the number of visitors and satisfaction, between the year before and after the refurbishment.
Overall, the museum has become more popular due to the renovation, whose visitors increased by 18000 from 74000 in the year before redecoration. Besides, in the survey, the interviewees had fine options about their visiting experience.
Overall, compared with the previous decoration of the museum, the average satisfaction in the situation, where the buildings have been refurbishment, has improved. At the meantime, more people feel satisfied and very satisfied, the percentages, therefore, grew from 30% and 15% to 40% and 35% respectively, whereas the figures for 'Dissatisfied' and 'very Dissatisfied' comments shrank from 40% and 10% to 15% and 5%. further, the ratio of people(5%), who did not have opinions n, were not influenced by the refurbishment.
- the bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 84
- Food can be produced more cheaply today because of improved fertilisers and better machinery. However, some people argue that such development may be dangerous to human health and may have negative effects on local communities.Do you agree or disagree? 70
- Today, high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of society in which they are sold.To what extent do you agree or disagree. 67
- many governmet 11
- in some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting universities studies. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Further
... shrank from 40% and 10% to 15% and 5%. further, the ratio of people5%, who did not hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43333333333 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20228390719 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7596528763 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.833333333 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0351763677538 0.215688989381 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0164310177192 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367408725596 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0328620354383 0.15604864568 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464739362041 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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