The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade Iabelled coffee and banana in 1990 and 2004 in five European countries

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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade – Iabelled coffee and banana in 1990 and 2004 in five European countries.

The given illustration provides how many millions of euros of Fairtrade – labelled coffee and bananas were got in two particular years, namely 1999 and 2004 in UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden.
Overall, it is clear that the sales of Fairtrade – labelled coffee and bananas of Switzerland was highest in 1999. After 5 years, there was a change when UK had more turnovers of Fairtrade – labelled coffee than Switzerland.
The turnovers of coffee that was Fairtrade – labelled in UK accounted 1.5 million of euros in 1999 before there was gradual increase to 20 million of euros in 2004. Besides, the sales of coffee of Switzerland in 2004 was twice higher than in 1999, about 6 and 3 million of euros. The number of income from coffee of other countries climbed from 1999 to 2004, about between 1.8 million of euros in 1999 and 2 million of euros in 2004 in Denmark; 1 million of euros in 1999 and 1.7 million of euros in 2004 in Belgium; 0.8 million of euros in 1999 and 1 million of euros in 2004 in Sweden.
The sales of bananas that was Fairtrade – labelled in Belgium was lowest in 1999 but the opposite was true for Denmark in 2004, particularly 0.6 million of euros in 1999 and 0.9 million of euros in 2004. In addition to, the rate of income of bananas in Sweden and Denmark fell by 1 and 0.9 million of euros in 2004 while those in other counties rose to 47, 5.5 and 4 million of euros in 2004.

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