The tables below show people's reasons for giving up smoking and when they intend to give up.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The two tables illustrate the five commonest aetiologies for quitting smoking and the specific time for giving up.
Overall, the majority of smokers are stopping smoking cigarettes owing to the concern of their general health, while the minority are only quitting early (within the next month).
As for the first table, the general health is the number one reason at 71%, followed by financial considerations at 31% and less risk of getting illness at exactly one-fifth (25%) of the total. Another striking feature is that heavy smokers (20+) stand at 19%, which is almost two times higher than moderate ones (10-19) and light smokers (less than 10) at 10% each in terms of present health problems.
Moving to the second table, approximately three-fifths (71%) intend to give up, with 60% chain smokers (20+), being far lower than the rest two groups at around 75%. 35% will give up within the next six months, compared to 21 and 12 percents of smokers who are set to quit within the next year and the next month respectively. A significant proportion of smokers (40%) are not willing to stop, whereas the others constitute approximately a half of this figure (40%) with a total of 29%.
- The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve a crime.Do you agree or disagree? 70
- A government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety Therefore, some people think that government should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits. To what extent you agree? 90
- Some people believe that the government should ban dangerous sporting activities, while others think that people should have the freedom to do whatever sports they choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 90
- By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 88
- space tourism will it bring positive or negative effects on the world s development Give your own opinion Use exmple based on your experience 58
Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
for essays in task I, better not to extend the topic, we write whatever we see, for example:
'five commonest aetiologies' should be simply 'five reasons'.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 10
No. of Words: 202 200
No. of Characters: 933 1000
No. of Different Words: 125 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.77 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.619 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.591 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 66 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.41 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.438 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.751 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.07 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 480, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of this figure 40% with a total of 29%.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, whereas, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83168316832 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55195979095 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648514851485 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.4729357369 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.428571429 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122970909777 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680876627621 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789820639137 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952963153606 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896826083244 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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