The tables give information on the temperatures and the hours of daylight in two particular cities in the same week in May in 2007.
A glance at the tables provided indicate information about how much temperature was and the daylight hours in two surveyed cities in the same week in May 2007.
It is apparent from the supplied data that the degree in Mumbai, India was by far higher than Moscow, Russia.
One particular fact highlighted by the figure is that in Mumbai, India, Friday and Sunday bore a striking resemblance in terms of the temperature, occupying with 33 and 29 Celsius degree at 6:00 and 19:05 respectively. With regard to Saturday which witnessed the hottest temperature with 34 Celsius degree in the morning and 29 Celsius degree in the evening.
When it comes to Moscow, Russia, there was precisely 8 and 5 Celsius degree on Friday, compared to 10 and 2 Celsius degree on Saturday at 4:15 and 22:00, in turn. At the same time, standing at the highest degree in the sunrise time, at 13 Celsius degree, the temperature on Sunday experienced 9 Celsius degree in the sunset time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83832335329 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6715714989 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574850299401 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.7587986484 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172582781636 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106578084667 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.190308926618 0.0843802449381 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150170237969 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.219952260259 0.0819641961636 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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