Task 1: The bar chart shows types of media to get daily news, by the age group 2011
Given is the bar chart depicting ways to acquire news among 5 age groups in 2011.
It is perceptible that except the under-17 group, Radio accounted for the majority of the others. Microblogging and radio have the same tendency, while social networking saw the downward trend.
Starting at 40%, the amount of radio users rocketed for 51%, to the peak in the 18-29 adolescent. The amount of radio users outnumbered of those in Social networking and Microblogging in the upper 17 age group. Although there were several changes in the percentage, decreased when people’s age went up, Radio still dominated the first rank.
Regarding two media left, the number of customers who use Social networking as the way to get news outweighed those in Microblogging. Appealing almost people whose age is lower-29, but this type of media is ignored by the adults, it witnessed the rapid drop when people’s age passed the milestone of 29, decreased for a half in 50-64 age group. On the other hand, Microblogging acquired for the minority, but the number of users in this media were stable, even when dropped or increased, the fluctuating percentage were not over 5%.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-09-07 | Mollymaul | 84 | view |
| 2022-10-01 | trần thị quỳnh | 84 | view |
| 2022-10-01 | trần thị quỳnh | 89 | view |
| 2021-12-31 | tranvuongphuongmy | 78 | view |
| 2021-11-14 | soomi2209 | 67 | view |
- The government should control the amount of violence in films and televisions in order to decrease violent crimes in society To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion 65
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is 93
- The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009 The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants 73
- Everyone experiences being a leader at some point in their life However not everyone is good at leading others What do you think are the qualities of a good leader Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 4, column 433, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...he minority, but the number of users in this media were stable, even when dropped or...
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Line 4, column 488, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... stable, even when dropped or increased, the fluctuating percentage were not over...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, regarding, so, still, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9793814433 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77459436627 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603092783505 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2981772949 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232749601215 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954559748955 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106496225056 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159795613607 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127438130071 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.