task 1: the birth rate
The line graph gives information about the birth rates of China, and America from 1920 to 2000 and how these rates changed during the 80-year period.
Overall, it is clear that the birth rates of both nations decreased throughout the research given. Additionally, both trends were similar to in terms of a general decline.
The birth rate of the US began at about 11% in 1920 and then fell considerably to under 5% in 1945. 5 years later, there was a sharp increase to exactly 15%, which was its highest point over the period of 80 years. However, the rate experienced a dramatic fall at the end of the period, reaching the final figure at about 7% in 2000.
At the same time, the birth rate in China varied more significantly than in the US. Although the rate fluctuated, it dropped dramatically to 5% in 1940. The rate of birth unchanged from 1940 to 1945 before going up dramatically to become the highest point of the whole line graph at 20%, in 1950. On the contrary, there was a sharp fall in the birth rate of China by 15% in 1965. the figure ended at approximately 2% in the year 2000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 380, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...the birth rate of China by 15% in 1965. the figure ended at approximately 2% in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45771144279 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4849837383 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562189054726 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0385893153 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4545454545 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319761920603 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140840709006 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987665153756 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2130937779 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627346842892 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.