Task 1: The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013
The bar charts compare airline tickets’ prices when moving from Sydney to Melbourne and backward in 2013
Overall, most tickets on Friday costed the highest when the price on weekdays is quite low and stable. Both charts show similar patterns except for week 1 when the date that booked with the highest tickets’ price was different
Booking a flight from Sydney to Melbourne in the first week was remarkably expensive ($80), roughly doubled the figure from Tuesday to Thursday. However, in week 2 the Monday price decreased significantly to just $50, while the price of tickets at the weekends still remained the same
In contrast, the highest price date when traveling from Melbourne to Sydney in week 1 was Friday with $80, followed by Monday and Saturday with $60. Moving to the second week, it is apparent that there were declines in the price of all days but Tuesday, Wednesday and Thursday, which all stayed stable at around $35
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, still, while, except for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93081761006 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43107592174 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.4926829268 173% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.9609215925 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.0 112.824112599 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.75 22.9334400587 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.5 5.23603664747 334% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240084310948 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149985633773 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637302444923 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173851350441 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688460922787 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.2329268293 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.3012195122 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.9970731707 160% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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