• Task 1: The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the main stage in the process of producing electricity with one kind of coal.
Overall, this is a manufacturing process in which coal is converted into gas in order to create electricity.
In the first stage, coal is mined by the factory in the shape of large rocks. Then, its dimension is remarkably reduced by the crusher. Having been transported to the gasifier factory by trucks, coal is combusted with the purpose of producing gas. Then, they give gas to another factory for producing electricity.
At the following stage, people cool gas and then clean it by deleting other substances in giant pipes. Finally, purified gas is moved to the gas power plant before converted into electricity. In addition, people waste heat in two stages including cooling and creating electricity. The produced electricity goes to houses, factories in order to continue the convenient life and work of people.
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- Task 1 The charts below give information about children under 18 learning musical instruments in one region of the UK in 1996 and 2016 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- Task 2 Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant exa 61
- Task 2 Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets Others however think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 56
- Task 1 The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group 78
- Task 1 The table below shows the percentage of first year students who gave very good rating to the resources provided by the college for three courses Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relev 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 395, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the convenient life and work of people.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then, as to, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13245033113 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84365956459 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596026490066 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.3182968641 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.5 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110195625511 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504089859906 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722613100597 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955955175365 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916556700877 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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