The given table depicts the proportion of two groups of residents, which were distinguised by age, riding bikes in 2011 in a particular area.
It is clear that the percentage of male and female who are under 10 participated in biking activities contributes for a largest number of the table in total. It can also be seen that women were much more active than men in the method of stress relief.
Looking at the table, from 0 to 9 years old residents, makes up more than 50% of all city-dwellers in both girls and boys and that figure decreased slightly to 42,2% and 24,6% in women and men's data respectively. Next, from 18 to 39, only 17,1% of women biked regularly and less than 10% of men's bicycles were activate at that time.
Moreover, it can be said that older towners used two-wheel vehicles less time than younger generation, so it leads to the smallest data in the table, which was calculated around 12.3% and 8.0% for female and male correspondingly. In contrast, the percentage of that climbed up mildly to 18.5% and 13.2% in both genders in the retired group.
- The table shows the number of mobile phones and personal computers per 1000 people in 2003 in 6 different counties Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The Table below shows the results of a survey that asked 6800 Scottish adults aged 16 years and over whether they had taken part in different cultural activities in the past 12 months 92
- Many young people today choose or are forced to go and work abroad What are the advantages disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country compared with living and working in your own country Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects other people think in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history Discuss both the views and give your opinion 73
- It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise What are the causes and solution 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ed in biking activities contributes for a largest number of the table in total. I...
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Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'activated'.
Suggestion: activated
...and less than 10% of mens bicycles were activate at that time. Moreover, it can be s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so, well, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68586387435 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66659242607 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8206684032 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.857142857 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10781675745 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557437362766 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588032588224 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743059779871 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515582471677 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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