Task The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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Task: The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts illustrate how much a proportion of water is used for a range of aims between six-nation of the world.
Overall, most water in Asia and Africa is for agriculture use, in comparison with the industrial field, Europe and America preferred than, whereas the amount of domestic use accounts for lowest point, except South America areas.
Regarding Central Asia areas are most known as irrigation systems with the highest data to 88% that adapts to residents who be lived there, followed by Southeast Asia and Africa witnessed considerable figures of 81%, 84%, respectively. In contrast, the proportion of water for domestic use is larger than the figures of industrial use with its charts ranging from 12% to 5%, which a great deal of domestic use in Africa at 9%, Central Asia at 7%, Southeast Asia at 12%, otherwise, water consumption in Southeast Asia, Central Asia, Africa at 7%, 5%, 7% for industrial, respectively.
It is clearly shown that most waters for industrial used make up a half of pie charts in both two areas as Europe and America with the figures of 53% and 48%, while South America has just at 10%. In addition, the consumption of water for agriculture in South America has a twofold compared to North America and Europe for 39% and 32%, the domestic use hit the least with its figures of 13%, 19% and 15% in 3 developed areas, namely North America, South America and Europe.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79835390947 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61882347247 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510288065844 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1745838764 43.030603864 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 194.333333333 112.824112599 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.5 22.9334400587 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167577755575 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105667149582 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553489947136 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128446160715 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411696111822 0.0819641961636 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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