What are the benefits of requiring young people to serve in the army? Does participation in community work qualify as an alternative?
Some proposed that young generations are being to responsibilities to engage in the army, in that serving army is simultaneously protecting the motherland from the invader attacked in own country. While others claimed that community activities are worth considering that could to replacing this. Looking from an overall perspective, this essay will be discussing both objects highlighted.
Concerning the army seems to one’s compulsory in most countries, those who are part of the military force always have spirits into combating on the frontier and constantly discipline themselves into their faults. Indeed, many young generations are in favour of taking part in the army permanently. It is also expressing one's feelings of patriotism about how to preserve their country at all. Meanwhile, it sometimes pushes on their team spirits and is learning to address all serious conditions, from this, they will be becoming an independent person and are deserving of one’s integral of the army in their country. In particular, in Vietnam, all men are above 18 ages is required to participating in the army, they do not refuse this, and are felt to taking pride to do that.
On the other hand, it is irrefutable that many people are not certainly excited to do that. Many families and young people are seeking to ignore this and do not follow this rule. They are fearful of the army so that it leads to emerging of community activities. These activities have just needed to be part of their engagement, skills, and time. By doing this, they will be acting as volunteers, and along with that, they will be obtaining professional skills and are getting more experiences thanks involving in this activity. Thinking up to further this, the accomplished community will be an advent of good things which are geared towards the prosperous country.
In conclusion, in both matters, military and community services are equal to benefits to dwellers. Nevertheless, it needs to come from voluntary, so that people are heartfeltly dedicated to these organizations particular.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 198, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...om the invader attacked in own country. While others claimed that community activitie...
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Line 2, column 322, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...army permanently. It is also expressing ones feelings of patriotism about how to pre...
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Line 2, column 557, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...l be becoming an independent person and are deserving of one’s integral of the army in their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, nevertheless, so, well, while, in conclusion, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21621621622 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97629565287 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546546546547 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4364728085 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5625 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158689041461 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547834548269 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357957180374 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980572510529 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00820347799409 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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