what are the benefits of requiring young people to serve the Arm? Does participation in community work qualify as an alternative?
In any country joining military service is a privileged act. Individuals who are unable to join military can also take part in community service as an alternative. In this essay I will discuss about the benefits of serving military and how taking part in community service serves as an alternative.
To begin with, working as military personnel makes you physically strong, due to rigorous training, healthy diet which is part of the routine. This contributes to your health and makes you agile, moreover it enhances your immunity. The other benefit is discipline and time management. Army person is very diligent when it comes to organize their day-to-day activities, as they plan it in proper way and with specific deadlines, also they follow them at the core.
Now, what about other who cannot join military but want to give to the society. Due to rigorous election criteria and age limitation not everyone can join military, for such people contributing to community is best option as it helps them to follow their passion for helping people or community per se. Also, people can do this in their free time and as per availability.
In conclusion, join military and servicing community has positive traits and people can choose either of them depending on their passion and lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06542056075 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71890345923 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593457943925 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3402199237 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5454545455 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14843057701 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572688059167 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533932141597 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881246237866 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387344099775 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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