Task1: The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The supplied two pie charts represent how much money was received for childrens^ charity and its outlay in USA during one year.
Overall, donated food shared as the biggest proportion among in revenue sources as the program services which accounted for a significant amount of expenditure.
In detail, the total Received amount was a slight higher than the amount of expenditure $53/561,580 and $53,224,896 respectively. With regards to Revenue sources , Donated food comprised of over the half of total charity by 86.6% , while Community contributions was the second place with 10.4 %. By following it, the program revenue shared 2.2 %, while both Investment income and Government grants together accounted for 0.4 % as the same as other kinds of income.
According to outlay,the program service was the largest proportion to 95.8% , whereas, the expenditure of fundraising category was 2.6 %.and Management and General,in contrast, shared the lowest expenditure by 1.6%.

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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54054054054 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90157307821 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655405405405 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5028128394 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 54.0 1.69756097561 3181% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117564724661 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653201686922 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926522158109 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853947407018 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104464973588 0.0819641961636 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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