The three bar charts show the level of participation education and science in developing and industrialised countries in1980 and 1990
The three bar charts depict the participation in education, scientists and technicians and spending money on research and for both well developed and developing countries throughout the period of ten years which started from 1980.
Overall, it is evident that, the figure for industrialised countries always higher than developing countries. A significant growth visibled for for scientists and technicians and expanding make money on research.
According to the illustration, the population of economy growing countries started their schooling in the years of about 2.5 which were almost three times lower than industrialised countries. After ten years, the average year of schooling slightly increased by approximately by 1 year and 2 years for both countries respectively.
From the second bar chart, industrialised countries had over 40 people in per thousand as scientists and technicians which was nearly 30% higher than developing countries in 1980. But within ten years, the proportion of scientists reached at 70% in per thousand which was significantly higher by about 60% than the counterpart of developed countries. However, in research and development vulnerable economic country invested 50 billions USD wheras their opponent expended more than 100 billions USD. In 1990, both of these countries showed opposite trend ; economy growing country invested only about 25 billions USD while industrialised country invested 17 times higher than developing countries.
- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities 82
- The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007 78
- The three bar charts show the level of participation education and science in developing and industrialised countries in1980 and 1990 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77168949772 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13845779888 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543378995434 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1580211996 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.444444444 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251520164604 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112855035151 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826431853853 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154826279385 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696138330359 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 11.4140731707 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.