The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981 1991 and 2001 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The three pie chart illustrate the information about how much amount spend on Salaries, Resources, Equipment etc.

In 1981, 40% of amount accounted for Teachers salaries which is highest among all. the second higher amount paying out for Worker's salaries that was 28%. Diffrent Resources like book and other Furniture and Equipment constitute same amount 15%.

Furthermore, half of the salaries paid for the Teachers in 1991, which is reduced by 5% in 2001. Workers salaries constitute 22% in 1991 which was decreased by 7% in 2001. there is negligible changes in Insurance by 1% between 1981 and 1991. Which grew in 2001 by 5%. Out of total expenditures 20% amount accounted for diffrent Resources. in 2001, only 9% for thease Resources.

In 2001, the amount spend on Furniture and Equipment constituted 23%. whereas in1991, it account only 5% that means it plummeted by 19%.

To conclude, from the given chart it can be seen that the highest amount paying out for Teacher's salaries and lowest amount spend on Insurance.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08235294118 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61890914717 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.805407119 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4615384615 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.0769230769 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126243075032 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567619809765 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516274335339 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081279981038 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052616219719 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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