the three Pie Charts below show the coffee production and consumption of coffee and where the profit goes around the world

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the three Pie Charts below show the coffee production and consumption of coffee and where the profit goes around the world.

The given pie charts provide the information about the percentage of coffee production, consumption and where the profit goes across the world.

Taking a general overview, it is apparent that the percentage of making coffee in South Africa has the maximum and Japan has the minimum proportion in the case of consumption. While, 51% profit is taken by delivery service.

It can be clearly seen that South Africa has the highest percentage of making coffee , which has recorded to 44% followed by Indonasian is 22%. The percentage in Japan i 18%, whereas in Vietnam is 16%. However, in the case of the consumption, there is a minimum difference, which has noticed between Europe and America. Whilst, 4% more is consumed coffee by people rest of the world rather than Japanese.

Turning to the next information, as regards profits of coffee, almost half of the total proportion is taken by the delivery service. Whereas, 15% and 10% profits are showed for producers and exporters respectively. Beside this, the it is stood at 24%, which is taken by the retailers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... proportion in the case of consumption. While, 51% profit is taken by delivery servic...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... the highest percentage of making coffee , which has recorded to 44% followed by I...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...nd exporters respectively. Beside this, the it is stood at 24%, which is taken by the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while, as regards

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00561797753 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75292615514 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.794117223 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254364589972 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882236794061 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118925802872 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171421276652 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144917740286 0.0819641961636 177% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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