The supplied two pie charts demonstrate the proportion of energy resources which consumed in the USA between 1980 and 1990.
Overall, although oil sources^ decreased significantly over the decade ,it shared the biggest proportion both 1980 and 1990.By contrast, hydroelectric power consumption was the lowest in both given time.As regards to the source of energy nuclear power and coal increased over the decade.
With regards to oil resources comprised 42 %of all energy sectors in 1980 ,then figure decreased remarkably by 33% in 1990.Likewise, there was a slight decrease in the proportion of natural gas resources by 1%.By contrast, the source of energy of natural gas and of nuclear power rose significantly by 5 %,were 27 % and 10 respectively in 1990.Finally, the percentage of hydroelectric power was stable by 5 % over the decade.
Generally,oil, natural gas and coal shared the biggest proportion over the span year, however, nuclear power and hydroelectric power were the lowest.
- In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 56
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year. 73
- The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 93
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The supplied two pie charts demonstrate the proportio...
^^
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ergy resources which consumed in the USA between 1980 and 1990. Overall, althoug...
^^
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd 1990. Overall, although oil sources^ decreased significantly over the decade...
^^
Line 2, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...verall, although oil sources^ decreased significantly over the decade ,it shared...
^^
Line 2, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...decreased significantly over the decade ,it shared the biggest proportion both 19...
^^
Line 2, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...e biggest proportion both 1980 and 1990.By contrast, hydroelectric power consumpt...
^^
Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd 1990.By contrast, hydroelectric power consumption was the lowest in both give...
^^
Line 2, column 194, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ower consumption was the lowest in both given time.As regards to the source of e...
^^
Line 2, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...tion was the lowest in both given time.As regards to the source of energy nuclear...
^^
Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... source of energy nuclear power and coal increased over the decade. With regards...
^^
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...prised 42 %of all energy sectors in 1980 ,then figure decreased remarkably by 33...
^^
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 42 %of all energy sectors in 1980 ,then figure decreased remarkably by 33% in 1...
^^
Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...all energy sectors in 1980 ,then figure decreased remarkably by 33% in 1990.Like...
^^
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Likewise
...re decreased remarkably by 33% in 1990.Likewise, there was a slight decrease in the pro...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...oportion of natural gas resources by 1%.By contrast, the source of energy of na...
^^
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... by 1%.By contrast, the source of energy of natural gas and of nuclear power ro...
^^^
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...%.By contrast, the source of energy of natural gas and of nuclear power rose s...
^^
Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., the source of energy of natural gas and of nuclear power rose significantly ...
^^
Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , were
... nuclear power rose significantly by 5 %,were 27 % and 10 respectively in 1990.Final...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 328, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se significantly by 5 %,were 27 % and 10 respectively in 1990.Finally, the percen...
^^
Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...,were 27 % and 10 respectively in 1990.Finally, the percentage of hydroelectric power ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 401, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he percentage of hydroelectric power was stable by 5 % over the decade. Generall...
^^
Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , oil
...table by 5 % over the decade. Generally,oil, natural gas and coal shared the bigge...
^^^^
Line 4, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lly,oil, natural gas and coal shared the biggest proportion over the span year, ...
^^
Line 4, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and coal shared the biggest proportion over the span year, however, nuclear pow...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, likewise, so, then, as regards
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41290322581 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12634408597 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522580645161 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => OK
Sentence length SD: 123.165285288 43.030603864 286% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 209.75 112.824112599 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.75 22.9334400587 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.23603664747 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 1.69756097561 1473% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106676865558 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777094702675 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556504179143 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777094702675 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556504179143 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.2329268293 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.