The two layouts demonstrate the changes which had happened in road access to a city hospital by 2010.
The two layouts demonstrate the changes which had happened in road access to a city hospital by 2010.
Overall, since 2007 the road has experienced some dramatic changes including the relocation of the bus station and adding two roundabouts.
Looking at the map in 2007, it is crystal clear that the hospital road was straight and had six bus stops on either side of the road. In 2010, however, the bus stops eliminated completely and a bus station was built on the west part of the hospital road. In addition to this, by 2010, two roundabouts had built connecting the city road and the hospital road to the bus station.
In 2007, the car park was located on the corner of the city road and the hospital road, which staffs and the general public could park their vehicles there. By 2010, the staff car park had remained in its previous location and a new car park had constructed adjacent to the Ring road, providing more space for the people to park their cars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the hospital road to the bus station. In 2007, the car park was located on the c...
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Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...the hospital road, which staffs and the general public could park their vehicles there. By 201...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59537572254 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39077268805 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508670520231 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7814940829 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.492427727798 0.215688989381 228% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.292009495294 0.103423049105 282% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.298533435914 0.0843802449381 354% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.394268931568 0.15604864568 253% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.35378764967 0.0819641961636 432% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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