The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Both maps illustrate the re-orientation of the town Denham since 1986 to current days.

In overall, The town is converted to the residential area with more number of population, No more farm's present today. A new concept of urbanized town plan along with retirement stay is introduced with the elimination of a garden.

The town is expanded for housing rather than cultivation and farms, Southwest coast and northeast territory of the farmland is converted into a residential area. The shops are stashed for the western part beside the coast of the river stoke, and the post office is ideal as is it. Even though for proper management of residential areas new roads are constructed than earlier, whereas it was barren.

Also, A small sub road which was used for connecting river and a town is completely knocked out, and the primary school expanded its building size from 1 to 3. In 1986, there was an extended garden with the large house in the east of a town, but after 40 years, it narrowed its size and more building are added to convert to a retirement home, Whereas the bridge in the northern territory is same through the period.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ritory of the farmland is converted into a residential areas. The shops are stash...
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Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'area'?
Suggestion: area
...rmland is converted into a residential areas. The shops are stashed for the western ...
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Line 7, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...rimary school expanded its building size from 1 to 3. In 1986, there was an exten...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...3. In 1986, there was an extended garden with the large house in the east of a to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78894472362 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59429867138 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597989949749 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8324623074 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.125 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.093853913518 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044974053518 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458595627517 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0716992770387 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511356179838 0.0819641961636 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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