The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The first given map illustrates the initial condition of an island, whereas the second one depicts the island after it was converted into a tourist area.
Overall, it is clear that the island underwent significant changes during the construction period, considering that a number of tourist facilities were added.
In terms of size, the island length is 100 metres. Initially, except some trees, the island surface was fairly blank. Moreover, there was also a beach in the west. Subsequently, a swimming area was developed near the beach. Following the construction, the island has two accommodation areas, separated by a reception in the center. In the northern part of the island there was built a restaurant, while the southern part added a pier.
The island currently benefits from infrastructure. The vehicle track crosses the island from the north to the south, connecting the restaurant, the reception and the pier. The footpath links the cottages and, in addition, connects the ones located in the west to the beach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...restaurant, the reception and the pier. The footpath links the cottages and, in add...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276041666667 0.268076937826 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.135416666667 0.116061578633 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0520833333333 0.0759168565197 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0260416666667 0.0366838410393 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0104166666667 0.0131127313244 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114583333333 0.155750635184 74% => OK
Participles: 0.0572916666667 0.0379272487307 151% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86853275836 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0104166666667 0.0210936926555 49% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.197916666667 0.0948980150116 209% => Less determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1031.0 1161.00487805 89% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.9 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.21084337349 5.90752243213 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.403614457831 0.337110787985 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277108433735 0.247514529752 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192771084337 0.171178102325 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144578313253 0.112407865282 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86853275836 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.546246751206 111% => OK
Word variations: 55.1108506599 49.3433353143 112% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0909090909 23.0094962315 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0441580904 42.9750493124 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7272727273 135.714022679 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0909090909 23.0094962315 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 0.689975730869 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 42.8017524644 47.7609492067 90% => OK
Elegance: 2.60606060606 2.94281807926 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481113465459 0.418131533498 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.151065617936 0.181151798455 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0960822327507 0.0850326197045 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.698072986836 0.706616315825 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.202878839525 0.157042692854 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228155827461 0.228904883108 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0894618768008 0.108899403657 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.380548736529 0.367819155151 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.161567925938 0.0812612215331 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331286813137 0.316326947829 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039270020991 0.0921553760075 43% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.08536585366 220% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.02926829268 198% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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