The two maps shows the changes happend to an island after it made a tourist location
Overall, new buildings, tourist cottages , roads and foot paths build in order to attract tourists, while the no trees were cut down during these developments.
In the first map there is absolutely nothing in the graph except some trees and a beach.
However, after island became a tourist location an overall changes can be seen, firstly a restaurant and reception counter were built at the middle of the island. Secondly, a small port for the tourist boats constructed in to the sea.A road is connecting restaurant,reception and pier. Cottages for tourists, can be seen at the both sides of the restaurant and reception and foot paths linked each cottages to the other in a circle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sland after it made a tourist location Overall, new buildings, tourist cottages...
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...Overall, new buildings, tourist cottages , roads and foot paths build in order to ...
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... cut down during these developments. In the first map there is absolutely not...
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...tourist boats constructed in to the sea.A road is connecting restaurant,reception...
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... the sea.A road is connecting restaurant,reception and pier. Cottages for tourists, can be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 645.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92366412214 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84746717798 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618320610687 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 188.1 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2015037381 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174368361853 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888331116908 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591601670478 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124301887963 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104580062105 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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