The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The following pictures show us how the road which lead to an urban hospital changed after 3 years from 2007.
Generally, a lot of modifications can be observed while many facilities disappeared for the replacement of the more modern ones.
A closer look at the two maps reveals that until 2010, all the bus stops were grouped into one bus station which connected two distinguished roundabouts on opposing sides of the hospital road.
Furthermore, we can also realize that there were a division of places for car parking. With the increase in demand of citizens, people built one more car park for public and the previous one now used for just staff only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 545.0 965.302439024 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 113.0 196.424390244 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82300884956 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2603904387 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66078985398 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.752212389381 0.547539520022 137% => OK
syllable_count: 168.3 283.868780488 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4265437208 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115512107778 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538989419684 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661776087662 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673736774605 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675759009899 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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