These two maps depict the way to reach a City Hospital in two different years, 2007 and 2010. At first glance, it is clear that differences are made by the construction of roundabouts and Bus Station. It is also caused by a change in Car Park.
In 2007, there was no Roundabout. But, 3 years later in 2010, two Roundabouts were constructed. The first Roundabout was built in the three-way intersection between Ring Road and Hospital Road. Another Roundabout was placed in the intersection between City Road and Hospital Road.
There were several Bus Stops along the Hospital Road in 2007. After 3 years, the Bus Stops were removed. However, a Bus Station was built in 2010 as a replacement. Bus Station can be seen in the west side of the map.
Change in Car Park also found. Previously, Car Park was united in the southeastern side of the map. In 2010, there was separation of Car Park. Car Park was divided into Public Car Park and Staff Car Park. Public Car Park was located in the northeastern side of the map, where Staff Car Park was located in the southeastern side of the map.
Overall, comparing the maps in 2007 and 2010, we can see that some new facilities were constructed, including Roundabouts, Bus Station and new Car Parks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69090909091 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69167679467 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463636363636 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1118656359 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.7058823529 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9411764706 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.94117647059 5.23603664747 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161965920701 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669770193011 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678260016577 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10705492477 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477204650493 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 61.2550243902 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.3012195122 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.03 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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