The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The maps illustrate the changes occurred for the access road to a hospital during 3 years from 2007 to 2010.
The main difference between the maps was adding two roundabouts in two sides of hospital road. One of them, constructed in junction with the ring road which was circled hospital and another one was built on the other side of road crossing with city road. Moreover, the six bus stops which distributed on the west and east of hospital road were destroyed and collected on a new bus station on the west of this road.
In addition to those, the previous car parking which was for staff and public, replaced with two new car parks. The staff car park was located on the same place of ancient parking on the east of hospital road while people can park their vehicles on the east of city hospital ring road. People could reach this parking from the entrance on the ring road.
- The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to young children).to what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity 78
- governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, while, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5625 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2163807773 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49375 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6912100912 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.285714286 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333820199925 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165405749885 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108119840879 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253116864638 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922277671378 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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