The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
From the first map, there is a main road called "Hospital Road", which extends from south to north. There are three bus stops on both sides of the road. The city hospital is at the end of the hospital road, which is surrounded by the road.
After the construction work in the past three years, great changes have taken place in the road. In 2010, a new public parking lot was built next to the city hospital. Two roundabouts were paved at the entrance and exit of hospital road. On its west side, the bus stop in front of it has become a bus stop. On the other side, the bus stop and parking lot were replaced by a new employee parking lot.
To sum up, after the completion of the construction, the road traffic conditions of citizens to the city hospital have changed significantly, and more parking lots have been added in this area. At the same time, the city hospital, the ring road and the city road have also been well protected.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47126436782 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44776315391 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545977011494 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0950131419 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183858760175 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830391506848 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062209303227 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134269110546 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499477674151 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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