The two maps below show road access to a city Hospital in 2007 and in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The two maps below show road access to a city Hospital in 2007 and in 2010
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

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The given map illustrates the change in the road access to a city Hospital from 2007 to 2010

On the whole, the hospital had witnessed massive changes in areas primarily to cope with increasing urbanization
The most conspicuous change had been made at the near places of hospital road, where bus station had been built by removing all the bus stops near to hospital road. Moreover two roundabouts had been constructed by connecting Hospital,bus station and city road on either end of Hospital road. The road (ring road and Hospital road) all remain unchanged

The changes were mainly around the hospital and largest of these was related to parking .In 2007 there was a small port parking lot along Hospital road for both staff and th public .By 2010 they had decided to separate the public and staff parking by adding on exclusively public parking areas running along the east side of the city Hospital

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... with increasing urbanization The most conspicuous change had been made at the ...
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...ll the bus stops near to hospital road. Moreover two roundabouts had been constructed by...
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... been constructed by connecting Hospital,bus station and city road on either end of ...
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... largest of these was related to parking .In 2007 there was a small port parking ...
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...argest of these was related to parking .In 2007 there was a small port parking lo...
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... related to parking .In 2007 there was a small port parking lot along Hospital ro...
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...spital road for both staff and th public .By 2010 they had decided to separate the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, on the whole

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87974683544 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44295706859 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 22.4926829268 231% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.206123006 43.030603864 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 257.0 112.824112599 228% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.6666666667 22.9334400587 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243555715723 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171013943692 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0173484649307 0.0843802449381 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161495719864 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103176927137 0.0819641961636 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.9 13.2329268293 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 61.2550243902 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.3012195122 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.9970731707 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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