The two maps below show road access to a city Hospital in 2007 and in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ily to cope with increasing urbanization The most conspicuous change had been ma...
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... with increasing urbanization The most conspicuous change had been made at the ...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...ll the bus stops near to hospital road. Moreover two roundabouts had been constructed by...
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Suggestion: , bus
... been constructed by connecting Hospital,bus station and city road on either end of ...
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... largest of these was related to parking .In 2007 there was a small port parking ...
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...argest of these was related to parking .In 2007 there was a small port parking lo...
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... related to parking .In 2007 there was a small port parking lot along Hospital ro...
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...spital road for both staff and th public .By 2010 they had decided to separate the...
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...ital road for both staff and th public .By 2010 they had decided to separate the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, on the whole

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87974683544 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44295706859 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 22.4926829268 231% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.206123006 43.030603864 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 257.0 112.824112599 228% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.6666666667 22.9334400587 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243555715723 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171013943692 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0173484649307 0.0843802449381 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161495719864 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103176927137 0.0819641961636 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.9 13.2329268293 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 61.2550243902 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 10.3012195122 217% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.9970731707 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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