The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, really, so, then, thus, while, i feel, in addition, in brief, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 3.15609756098 444% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 70.0 5.60731707317 1248% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 33.7804878049 234% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 3.97073170732 378% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2666.0 965.302439024 276% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 528.0 196.424390244 269% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04924242424 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79356345386 3.73543355544 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04012612408 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 283.0 106.607317073 265% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535984848485 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 821.7 283.868780488 289% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 1.53170731707 849% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 3.36585365854 327% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 8.94146341463 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.747677273 43.030603864 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.315789474 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7894736842 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78947368421 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 3.70975609756 404% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0142836832483 0.215688989381 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00484873666736 0.103423049105 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0100505812744 0.0843802449381 12% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00638012368797 0.15604864568 4% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00744867742596 0.0819641961636 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 40.7170731707 322% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.4329268293 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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