Nowadays, by development in the all aspects of our live such as technology, amenities, hobbies and other parts of routine life we have unexpectedly more option to choose rather in comparison to our ancestors our grand parents. In my opinion, by the time goes by, mankind has more opportunity to select suitable choices.
The world in 21st century, people want to live more comfortable and without any stress and hesitation, so they try to invent or create some innovative things to make life pretty easier that before. For instance, in last decade when it comes to hobby, they had a few numbers of fun to do like outdoor gathering, but currently by development in technology, social media, game consoles or other inventions are added as the option of hobby to amuse people in their leisure time.
In addition, no one can deny the influence of public transportation as the option that does not exist in many years ago. Furthermore, even compare to last century, today we have new kinds of facilities like subway, monorail, etc. Likewise, train and air planes have more obvious improvement in speed and capacity to go faster and carry more passengers respectively. In medical problems scientist find some ways to provide life with ease. To exemplify, vaccine and drugs can conquer the contagious disease and relieve aches.
In brief, these days we have greatly more choice in almost all parts of our live compare to the past and this comes to true through some up-to-the-minute invention in each category like transportation, hobby and medical problems. From my point of view, life is easier than before.
- increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems,to what extend do you agree or disagree,what other measures do you think might be effective? 56
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this the case?What can be done about this problem? 73
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
...ore passengers respectively. In medical problems scientist find some ways to provide lif...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt of view, life is easier than before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, likewise, so, for instance, in addition, in brief, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7895659117 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639405204461 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.6574726629 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.272727273 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12093963307 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396734304778 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256632967741 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703923301548 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111174309674 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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