The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
the pictures demonstrated the changes to road access to hospital of the city in 2007 and in 2010.
it is clear that city hospital's railway has significant developments. The new construction reposed big amount of vehicles.
Specifically, in 2010, public car park was constructed in the east area of the city hospital while the ring road still remained. Staffs of hospital had their own place for their cars on the right of the hospital road. that means the bus stops stops were demolished.
In additional,two roundabouts appeared which allow traffic run smothly.It also made paths to the bus station which which was built in the south-west of the city hospital.Beside the disappearance of bus stops in two side of hospital road , the city road still existed .
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- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 78
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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the pictures demonstrated the changes to ro...
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...pital of the city in 2007 and in 2010. it is clear that city hospitals railway ...
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...tal of the city in 2007 and in 2010. it is clear that city hospitals railway ha...
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...7 and in 2010. it is clear that city hospitals railway has significant developments. T...
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...velopments. The new construction reposed big amount of vehicles. Specifically...
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...tion reposed big amount of vehicles. Specifically, in 2010, public car park w...
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...cars on the right of the hospital road. that means the bus stops stops were demolish...
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...f the hospital road. that means the bus stops stops were demolished. In additional,t...
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... the bus stops stops were demolished. In additional,two roundabouts appeared w...
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...ps were demolished. In additional,two roundabouts appeared which allow traffi...
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...ppeared which allow traffic run smothly.It also made paths to the bus station whic...
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...f bus stops in two side of hospital road , the city road still existed .
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...pital road , the city road still existed .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 636.0 965.302439024 66% => OK
No of words: 126.0 196.424390244 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01671774243 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 183.6 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.4909894372 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8571428571 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362065644897 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162390477741 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145081345099 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238915297126 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136428898829 0.0819641961636 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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