The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
These two maps depict an island between before and after building process for tourism destination. It can be clearly seen that before construction, the island just has simple beach and a wide coastal area, while after construction, it has many kind of infrastructure.
To begin with, before developing process, there is an empty area that contains simple beach, sea, and wide coastal area about 250 meter in length. Besides, some trees and many footpath are available, but without vehicle track.
On the other hand, after building process, the island will be improved for tourist purposes. Those developments will increase gradually because there are restaurant, accommodation, reception place, and sport area. Also, swimming facility becomes people’s purpose if people go to the beach. In addition, footpath and vehicle track become crucial part for people to go to other facilities.
To sum up, building process will be progressing tremendously in the tourist facilities.
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before developing process,
before the developing process,
flaws:
No. of Words: 151 200 //need more content for details after the construction.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 151 200
No. of Characters: 794 1000
No. of Different Words: 98 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.505 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.258 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.685 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 60 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 47 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.411 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.393 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.568 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.075 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 240, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
... area, while after construction, it has many kind of infrastructure. To begin with, be...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'meter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'meters'.
Suggestion: meters
...h, sea, and wide coastal area about 250 meter in length. Besides, some trees and many...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun footpath seems to be countable; consider using: 'many footpaths'.
Suggestion: many footpaths
...eter in length. Besides, some trees and many footpath are available, but without vehicle trac...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to go to other facilities. To sum up, building process will be progressing tre...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'in addition', 'kind of', 'to begin with', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276243093923 0.268076937826 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.14364640884 0.116061578633 124% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0773480662983 0.0759168565197 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0276243093923 0.0366838410393 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0110497237569 0.0131127313244 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121546961326 0.155750635184 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0497237569061 0.0379272487307 131% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89501703534 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0276243093923 0.0210936926555 131% => OK
Particles: 0.00552486187845 0.00175180941692 315% => OK
Determiners: 0.060773480663 0.0948980150116 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0220994475138 0.00437022459523 506% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00552486187845 0.00967000014798 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 986.0 1161.00487805 85% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.9 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.5298013245 5.90752243213 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.423841059603 0.337110787985 126% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.317880794702 0.247514529752 128% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.205298013245 0.171178102325 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119205298013 0.112407865282 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89501703534 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668874172185 0.546246751206 122% => OK
Word variations: 65.0712419441 49.3433353143 132% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.7777777778 23.0094962315 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0852302257 42.9750493124 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.555555556 135.714022679 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 23.0094962315 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 0.689975730869 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.48048780488 270% => OK
Readability: 48.565857248 47.7609492067 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.45454545455 2.94281807926 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366094010921 0.418131533498 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106171214408 0.181151798455 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0983678655947 0.0850326197045 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.596287301634 0.706616315825 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.194163680652 0.157042692854 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140794919366 0.228904883108 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932343945082 0.108899403657 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.220521076359 0.367819155151 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0463390266189 0.0812612215331 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209014800353 0.316326947829 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101723417682 0.0921553760075 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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