The two rendered maps exhibit the pre-construction and post-construction images for Paradise Island.
The two maps illustrate the transformation of Paradise Island with the introduction of tourism.
It is noticeable that the island has undergone significant modifications between the two phases. Overall, the new construction has allowed visitors to access to island by sea and provided them with a variety of services.
Looking at the changes in more detail, we can see that in the past there were trees in the middle of the island. These are no longer present now, and instead we see the addition of an open restaurant at the center of the island with a BBQ area on the east side of the restaurant. There is a café that can be access by the restaurant by a new cycle path. In addition, a hotel complex and a swimming pool are seen on the west of the open restaurant, which was the location of a scientific research station in the past.
The two maps also shows changes that have been made to the pier located to the west of Paradise Island. The pier has been modernized and it allows cruise ships, in stead of old boats, to dock. Furthermore, the guests visiting this island are provided with a swimming area on the beach situated to the northwest and a scenic outlook on the northeast of the island.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cientific research station in the past. The two maps also shows changes that hav...
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Line 4, column 162, Rule ID: IN_STEAD_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'instead of'?
Suggestion: instead of
... modernized and it allows cruise ships, in stead of old boats, to dock. Furthermore, the gu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56221198157 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6795957112 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520737327189 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2729619962 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190766191218 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769415204838 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743881257167 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139002232239 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069032691392 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.