The given charts illustrate the total Demand, Production, Import and Employment Status changes in the UK steel industry between 1970 and 2000. In general, the initial impression is that the figure for Import rose markedly while the others reduced in the given period of time.
Regarding the value changes in the UK steel industry, the steel Demand stayed well-beyond the others at 200000 million tonnes, which is around 35000 million tonnes higher than the steel production in 1970. Twenty years later, both Demand and Production for steel witnessed a dramatic fall to just above 10000 million tonnes and nearly 8000 million tonnes, respectively. During the last ten-year period, both of them continuously decreased by 1000 million tonnes. Having the opposite trend, a gradual upswing was witnessed in UK Import from about 1000 million tonnes in 1970 to around 6000 million tonnes in 2000.
In terms of job prospects, the data dropped rapidly by nearly 30000 thousand in the first twenty years from approximately 50000 thousand. By 2000, this figure dipped to around 18000 thousand
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- The line graph below shows the production of paper wood pulp and sawn wood in the UK from 1980 to 2000 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The diagram illustrates the production of ethanol fuel from corn 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...y while the others reduced in the given period of time. Regarding the value changes in the...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s reduced in the given period of time. Regarding the value changes in the UK st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, regarding, well, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24137931034 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45248141303 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8252262107 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34366464784 0.215688989381 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140656555856 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101869077206 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193305848455 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0697375867093 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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