You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words
The line graph compares the percentages of employment in a variety of sectors over the 80-year period in the USA.
It is clear the agricultural livelihood were far the most popular job among other areas in 1930. By contrast, technical jobs were taken by the least number of people in the same year. However, the figures for all the other sectors overtook those for agricultural jobs by 2010.
In 1930, most Americans were working in the field of agriculture, at nearly 80%, while other sectors (industrial, sales and office, technical, and other services) were the least popular jobs, at below 20%. By 1990, the figure for farming, fishing and foresting gradually dropped to around 30%, which was the same percentage as the figure for industrial. The percentages of each technicians and sales people increased to just below 20% by the same year, while the figure for other services remained relatively stable, at between 10% and 16% over the whole 80-year period.
In 2010, the proportion of farmers reached its lowest figure, at 3%. All other remaining sectors saw an upward trend, at between 20% and nearly 40%, with the exception of the figure for other services in the same perio
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...bour force employment from 1930 to 2010.The different type of employment in various...
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Suggestion: The
...all observed to the value 10 since 1930.The commercial industrial sector of USA has...
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Suggestion: After
...r 1970 to 2010 which marked value of 40.After industial sector, the steady growth was...
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Suggestion: Similarly
...ibuted the value of 30 by the year 2010.Similarly to technical and commercial sector, a r...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...ibuted the value of 30 by the year 2010.Similarly to technical and commercial sector, a r...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Except
...creased to value of 20 by the year 2010.Except all this service mentioned above, a ste...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, similarly, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06349206349 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80392331326 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492063492063 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 22.4926829268 280% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 257.28885626 43.030603864 598% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 319.0 112.824112599 283% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.0 22.9334400587 275% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 5.23603664747 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954296293223 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070597326471 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402925167779 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070597326471 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402925167779 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.9 13.2329268293 256% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 61.2550243902 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 10.3012195122 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.9970731707 247% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 11.0658536585 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.