You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , Europe
...ear period at different landform of Asia,Europe and some parts of the United States. ...
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Suggestion: , overall
...r 1995 to 2000 in some parts of the Asia,overall money spent by user increased from 67 t...
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Suggestion: It
... spent by user increased from 67 to 110.It was observed from this wide range of da...
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Suggestion: , video
...ant increase in all forms such as cinema,video,music as well as television. Similarly,...
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Suggestion: From
... from 97 to 131 in some parts of Europe.From the graph,it is clearly observed that d...
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Suggestion: , it
...1 in some parts of Europe.From the graph,it is clearly observed that demands for pu...
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Suggestion: As
...ion sectors has increased in five years.As compared with this five year period res...
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Suggestion: , United
...pared with this five year period results,United states were at 184 in 1995 and aroused ...
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Suggestion: , money
...roused to 257 in year 2000. Therefore,money spend on all the different forms booste...
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Suggestion: , that
...n all the parts of world. As we conclude,that demand for television was found out to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98203592814 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00725216161 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568862275449 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.6630608839 43.030603864 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.4 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211838500558 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125247925759 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764428773921 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160057244825 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739442010151 0.0819641961636 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.