You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five year period.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The following bar graph represents money spent on different forms of entertainment over five year period at different landform of Asia,Europe and some parts of the United States.
From year 1995 to 2000 in some parts of the Asia,overall money spent by user increased from 67 to 110.It was observed from this wide range of data that there was significant increase in all forms such as cinema,video,music as well as television. Similarly, money spent on these forms found to be burgeon from 97 to 131 in some parts of Europe.From the graph,it is clearly observed that demands for publishing sectors and telelvision sectors has increased in five years.As compared with this five year period results,United states were at 184 in 1995 and aroused to 257 in year 2000.
Therefore,money spend on all the different forms boosted its growth in all the parts of world. As we conclude,that demand for television was found out to be maximum and demand for music remained nearly equal in all the landforms
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, therefore, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98203592814 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00725216161 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568862275449 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.6630608839 43.030603864 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.4 112.824112599 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211838500558 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125247925759 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764428773921 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160057244825 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739442010151 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.