The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The given line graph represents the proportion of various employment sectors in America between the time period of 1930 and 2010.
It is evident that the farming, fishing and foresting is the only category accounting for smaller segment over the times. On the other hand, the remaining patterns showed upward trajectories and eventually surpassed the fraction of farming, fishing and foresting which was the predominant sector at the beginning of the said period.
In terms of farming, fishing and foresting, in 1930, it provided occupations for 75% of the America citizens in workforce. But this figure saw a marginal drop until 1970. From 1970 onwards, a substantial change can be seen in the situation. The segment of UK populations working in this sector decreased precipitously from about 60% to almost only 2% in 2010.
On the contrary, other areas experienced reversed trends. The category showing the largest increase was industrial sector. In 1930, almost no one worked in this sector. However, there was a gradual growth until 1940, at which point this figure flattened out over the next 20 years. By the time 2010 entered, it had undergone a significant change with an almost 35% upsurge. Likewise, the remaining patterns rise slightly over the period shown despite some minor fluctuations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, so, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22380952381 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76005274523 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2709914172 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3846153846 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0911632430173 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030401298217 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411402005634 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693979382755 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532871857523 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.