You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of senior citizen (65 and over) over the period of a century (from 1940 to 2040) in the USA, Sweden and Japan.
Overall, the proportion of the people who aged 65 and over showed significant growth and also predicted to rise, though in different rates, over the century given for all three nations. At the start of the period, Japan had the least proportion of older population, which was drastically changed and predicted to the top of all. Although, Sweden followed the similar trend like The USA for first half of the century, for the rest half showed fluctuations.
With regard to the United States, the group of people age 65 and over was the highest, around 9% at the beginning, steadily rose to 15% in 1980. This figure dipped slightly (about 1%) for next 40 years and finally estimated to reach the lowest of about 23%. Likewise, the percentage of senior citizens was 7% in 1940 for Sweden, soared gradually in the first half of the century and reached around 14% in 1980. Finally, for the later part of the period this number showed significant fluctuations and predicted to be 25%.
On the other hand, Japan had the least percentage of older people at the start of the period (5%). As opposed to the other two countries, the figure remained just below 5% or same for next 60 years, started rising after 2000 and finally forecasted to peak at 27% in 2040.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: over
...the percentage of senior citizen 65 and over over the period of a century from 1940 to 20...
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Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of the century, for the rest half showed fluctuations. With regard to the Unit...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, likewise, so, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 249.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65863453815 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43768814882 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534136546185 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7209655514 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154493058198 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630668951099 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545329782425 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10087541709 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441210353975 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.