You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The pictures illustrate the information about the origin of the police's budget and on what category the money was spent in 2017 and 2018 in one area of England.
It is clear that the police received most of their money from the National Government in both years and the total budget witnessed an increase between two years. Moreover, the proportion of spending on salaries has the highest figure between three category where these money was spent.
In both 2017 and 2018, the National Government contributed 175.5 millions and 177.8 millions to the police's budget respectively, almost 5 times larger than the contribution of other sources, which is 38 million in 2017 and 38.5 millions in 2018. Local taxes are responsible for 91.2 millions in 2017 and slightly róe that figure to 102.3 million in 2018.
In 2017, 75 percent of the budget was spent to pay for the salaries, almost 10 times that proportion of expenditure on technology. In 2018, the proportion of spending on buildings and transport remained 17% as last year, while the spending on technology increased by 6% and the spending on salaries slided down to 69%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'category' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'categories'.
Suggestion: categories
...es has the highest figure between three category where these money was spent. In both...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
...est figure between three category where these money was spent. In both 2017 and 2018, th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97368421053 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64324257342 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.6308310393 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1428571429 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209471731714 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104028372458 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587190709632 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140994295689 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620119627518 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.