You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The provided table illustrates the ratios of pupils attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009. It signifies pupils percentage attending these four school types.
Overall, most people visited voluntary-controlled schools and community schools, while few attended specialist schools.
With reference to the most attended school, which are voluntary and community schools. In the year 2000, the former school is being attended by 52% of pupils. In the following five years, the trend for pupils attending voluntary schools slides down by 14%. Additionally, for the next four years, the projections fall down to 20% of pupils attending these type of schools. For community schools, pupils visiting them rise by time. For the year 2000, people visiting there are twelve percent, but in the next nine years, the proportion of pupils visiting there become five times of the former proportion.
Few people attend specialist and grammar schools. In the year 2000, nearly 12% pupils attended specialist schools, the proportion begins to slide about two percent in the upcoming nine years. On comparing with grammar school attendees, in the base year approximately 24% pupils visited there, but with growing number of years proportion of people visiting these schools become half of the previous proportion.
- The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'percents'?
Suggestion: percents
... 2000, people visiting there are twelve percent, but in the next nine years, the propor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, while, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49261083744 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74577409868 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492610837438 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5593196849 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9166666667 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221117300061 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108615526355 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919337273784 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165629841569 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113805747946 0.0819641961636 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.