You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.
The chart below shows the numbers of travelers at 2 train stations at different times of the day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph reveals information on the number of train travellers delivered by two train stations in London-Euston station (LEs) and Barcelona-Sants station (BSs) from 6 a.m. to midnight on a typical day. From an overall perspective, one of the most outstanding futures is that there was a downward trend in all figures given for the number of travellers by LEs. In contrast, the corresponding figures for the number of travellers by BSs fluctuated throughout the whole day.
In more detail, the figure of travellers by LEs recorded for the red line appeared to be by far the highest one, with nearly five thousand (4990 travellers) from 6 a.m. In contrast, the figure for travellers in BSs observed for the blue line, with only almost one thousand (1049 travellers).
In comparisons with two figures, the figure observed for two lines were a considerable reduction from 6 a.m. to 12 p.m. in lunch, with the corresponding numbers of the red line graph reduced considerably, to roughly two thousand ( 2267 travellers) and the blue graph line decreased to approximately four hundred (441 travellers). Surprisingly, the two figures were significant growth together, to almost three thousand (3260 travellers) from noon to 6 p.m. Then, the number of travellers by two stations were declined sharply, to well under two thousand (2000 travellers) from 9 p.m. to midnight.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve thousand 4990 travellers from 6 a.m. In contrast, the figure for travellers in ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... almost one thousand 1049 travellers. In comparisons with two figures, the figur...
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Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed considerably, to roughly two thousand 2267 travellers and the blue graph line ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08071748879 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07116946517 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.484304932735 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 326.7 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 3.36585365854 446% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.660559754 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 226.6 112.824112599 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.6 22.9334400587 194% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0943283445012 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693276489448 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476527244346 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752588069401 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484887649563 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.8 13.2329268293 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 61.2550243902 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.