You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn't write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear __________
Dear Manoj,
I was waiting for the photographs so desperately. You have clicked it like a professional, capturing the minutest of the details. Thank you so much for sending it so quickly. It has been the most memorable vacation, I ever had in my life, and I should say that it couldn’t have been possible without you.
By the way, did someone inform you that I lost my phone while returning back. I had stored your new email address in it. I tried my best to recollect it however it just didn’t come back. Because of this, I was unable to write to you after reaching home. Please don’t get angry for it.
Now it is my turn to invite you to my house here in India for a two-week vacation, during the summer time. You don’t have the privilege to say no to it. So better book your holidays now itself and start planning for it.
Bye for now. See you soon.
Best Regards
Lalit Modi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
...e inform you that I lost my phone while returning back. I had stored your new email address in...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...dia for a two-week vacation, during the summer time. You don't have the privilege to s...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 5.60731707317 660% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51497005988 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52870500978 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622754491018 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1687218687 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.2666666667 112.824112599 45% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.1333333333 22.9334400587 49% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252679326372 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847699776824 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496042969049 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163906387518 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172625433568 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 13.2329268293 41% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 61.2550243902 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.69 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.