The bar graph gives information about Somelands three main exports namely meat products, dairy products and international tourism in 2005,2015 and projections in 2025.
Overall, the exportation of meat products show a downward trend , while the exportation of dairy products and international tourism show a upward trend over the period.
When checking the figure for meat products, in 2005, meat products worth 4 billion USD exported from this place. But after ten years this figure reduced to less than 4 billion.The expected exportation of meat products in 2025 is only around 2.5 billion.
On the other hand, the exportation of dairy products and international tourism increased in 2015 comparing to 2005. Dairy products from almost 4.5 billion to nearly 8 billion and international tourism about 6 billion to around 6.5 billion. The projected exportation of dairy products in 2025 is just above 6.5 billion, which is lesser than its figure in 2015. However the exportation of international tourism expected to be rise in the future as well, in 2025 the figure for this category will be nearly 8 billion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24022346369 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88120773716 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513966480447 0.547539520022 94% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.7586189819 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.25 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178962834359 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102044645036 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827230863055 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139316968438 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104006603304 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.